Monday, June 25, 2012

STORYBOARD AUDITION - the HEARTACHES



If you want to be involved in the TAAFI storyboard workshop and want to work with my girl and light switch characters, here is an outline for a story I wrote:


Most of it is already storyboarded:


THE ENDING ISN'T STORYBOARDED YET.

HERE IS THE PART THAT HASN'T BEEN STORYBOARDED YET:

CFP is found

CFP decides it’s time to recycle himself, when a mailbox recognizes him.
The mailbox nudges a nearby telephone pole: ‘Hey! Doesn’t that guy match the description of that missing Fuzz character??

Telephone pole: ‘Yeah, that’s the way Tia’s phone described him to me.’

The telephone pole sends a message to Tia’s house: ‘We’ve spotted the Curly Fuzz Poodle, corner of 57th and 3rd, heading northeast, looking mighty ragged.’

Tia’s phone, wall socket, vestibule and tights wait around the corner for the Curly Fuzz Poodle to approach.
The tights jump on CFP and engulph him, tying himself up tight at the top. The tights walk home to Tia’s with CFP inside, and everyone is happy.

CFP gets fixed up

The socket observes CFP’s condition. ‘We can’t take him back like this. We gotta fix him up!’
A drawer in the vestibule opens and a needle and thread hop out. They begin to stitch up CFP’s holes.

The phone pulls his string to try and make him talk. We hear a rusty, garbled groan. ‘He’s all rusted up inside!’

A toothbrush volunteers to help. He sticks his brush into CFP’s ring hole and scrapes the rust off his talking mechanism.
CFP is sparkling and clean.

The objects take him to Roxy’s and shove him back in Roxy’s room through the window.

Mom and Dad argue

Back on Roxy’s bed, CFP just begins to settle in when he overhears an argument outside Roxy’s room.

Dad is accusing Mom of throwing out the Fuzz Poodle and Mom is flatly denying it.
Dad: ‘I can’t believe you threw out that poodle! Roxy hasn’t been the same since! How could you?’
Mom: ‘I’m telling you I never threw it out. You convinced me not to! I have no idea what happened to it.’

The Curly Fuzz Poodle gets an idea. He writes another note to Roxy.

Roxy comes home

She is completely depressed. She hurls her books on the bed and throws herself down for a good sob right smack on top of CFP. She starts crying but we see her back quivering from the agitation of the CFP as he is trying to wriggle out.

A little paw comes out under her belly pulling a talking string.
Roxy hears the string retracting as she has heard so many times before and stops crying.
She smiles as she realizes…she arches her back enough to look under her belly and we hear “Get off.”

She grabs the Fuzz Poodle and gives him a giant hug. She sees the note.

‘Dear Roxy, Your mom never threw me out, I threw myself out. She suggested getting rid of me, and I thought the end was near, so I took care of it myself. Your mom isn’t to blame. She even found me and fixed me up nice for you. So even though she thinks I’m a filthy, repulsive, immature pile of sawdust, she’s letting you have me anyways. That’s how much she loves you.P.S. Please pull my string.’

She pulls the string. Fuzz Poodle says: ‘AND I LOVE YOU TOO.’

Happy Ending

Roxy runs out to the living room and yells, ‘Mom, thank you!’
Dad sees CFP. ‘Holy mackerel! Where’d he come from?’
Roxy beams, ‘Mom found him and fixed him all up for me!’
Dad looks guilty and gives mom a hug. Mom is dumbfounded.
Everyone hugs.
Hug hug hug love love.

If you want to show me your chops, take a small section from this outline and sketch it out. Send me a link in the comments and I'll check it out.

If I think it cuts the mustard and you're interested I'll work with you at the TAAFI storyboard workshop.

**TIP: If you give the furniture and inmate objects lots of personality I will be duly impressed.

12 comments:

CLXcool said...

Hey John, im willing to do some of these scenes.Will it be alright if I can put these scenes on my deviantart account?

I'm not that good with coloring, but I am good with black and white though.

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Dudo said...

Here is the link to my storyboard of a section of the outline

greenhorngallery said...

greenhorn gallery: fritzy fly #1

I like "Fritzy Fly" but haven't developed his character.

Paul B said...

Hi John!
I know I can't be in the TAAFI storyboard workshop, but anyway, I wanted to give it a try to the Slab & Ernie Outline.

Here's my try!

I hope you can give me some critique.
Thanks for all!

Elana Pritchard said...

Here
Heartaches Snippet

Trevor Guitar said...

Ok so I have a gag for when Curly wants to 'recycle' himself. I think its a bit too dark for the cartoon but I'll share it here for fun.


'Recycle gag': Curly Fuzz at his low point.

Scott Cardona said...

Hey John heres the storyboard that I came up with. Ive already started drawing gags for the next Scene.

I had alot of fun doing this and getting to know the characters. Cant wait to start doing the next one!

Heartaches Storyboard 1

Bryan said...

Hey, John I made an attempt on the scene where CFP gets fixed up. I picked it up where the drawer opens and the needle hops out. I spent waaaaay too long on this, feedback would be great.

Heres the link: bzdart.blogspot.com

Elana Pritchard said...

CFP, a cute toy novelty fixer upper to pass the time. I heard he makes secret drawings too.