I love it when people do the lessons and get something out of it. Sometimes I get something out of it too, like this nice inked drawing by Alberto that I can add to my model sheets.
His Ink has retained the style of Jim's drawing, the curves and angles, and best of all a good control of the hierarchy of thick and thin lines.
Hey Alberto, can you post the first version, so I can show the before and after with my comments? It will help others who are into absorbing the fruits of cartoon knowledge.
Here's what he did before, so I gave him some notes and he did the one on top.
Obedience is a prelude to skill!
the notes are here:
http://likeanatombomb.blogspot.com/